Kevin:My dream is lawer but, lawer can change a judge and, counsel this three job
can change so, I want a judge and lawer,or ancounsel can change a judge
but I want a lawer so I do lawer test.

CORRECTIONS:My dream is to be a lawyer but being a lawyer can change a judge and counsel.  This three job
can change so, I want a judge and a lawyer or even a counsel can change a judge
but I want to be a lawyer so I am studying test for being a lawyer. 

Kevin:I learn a law I want a have a much of money and I want a recognize job,or
recognize person,and it's can do long during work many years more than a
office. Lawers work is in the court the lawer talk a interrogation.
So I want a this job, and it is not dangerous.I like this job.

CORRECTIONS: I want to learn about LAWS so I have to earn a lot of money first  and I want to be recognized, my job as well. And it can last for many years than working in an
office. Lawyers work is in the court the, lawyer will do the interrogation.
So I want this job, and it is not dangerous. I like this job.

EXPLANATIONS: I would like to just sum it all, be careful whenever you construct sentences make sure it really sounds well and it doesn't commit typographical errors most especially in spelling. But to sum it all, I love the way you think. Keep it up, Kevin! Thank you for sending your homework. ^^