First, I will see rhinoceros.
Second, I will see camel.
I'm going to be very excited in the zoo.

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1.
Anna: frist i see rhinoceros
Correct: First, I will see rhinoceros.
Explanation:
*Always begin your sentence with a capital letter.
*Since you have not been to a zoo, you can write your sentences in future tense.

2.
Anna: second i see camel
Correct: Second, I will see camel.
Explanation:
*Always begin your sentence with a capital letter.
*Since you have not been to a zoo, you can write your sentences in future tense.

3.
Anna: im going to very x10 the ZOO
Correct: I'm going to be very excited in the zoo.
Explanation:
*Always begin your sentence with a capital letter.
*Remember how to write I'm.
*Add a decribing word (adjective) to tell how you feel if ever you go to a zoo.

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