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작성자 : jhh***   ·   2014-09-11

My chuseok was very nice day,because I met my cousin and grandfa and grandma. I ate on chuseok delicious foods

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Hello there Paul,

Belated happy Chuseok. Thank you for submitting your homework. Please take note of my corrections. I hope you enjoyed your holiday. See you in our class..

My chuseok was very nice day,because I met my cousin and grandfa and grandma.

Correct: My Chuseok was a very nice day, because I met my cousin, grandpa and grandma.

**Capitalized the first letter of the proper noun. (ex: Chuseok)
** Use "a" before a noun to mean one thing or person.
** Avoid repeated words in a sentence to not sound redundant.
** Be careful with the spelling of the word " GRANDPA".

I ate on chuseok delicious foods.

Correct: I ate delicious food during Chuseok.

** Be careful with your word order.
** Use " during" to mean "at a particular moment in a period of time".

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