Denni's Homework:

In the ???¡§??, i went to my grand's mother house and met my relatives.
There were a younger sister.
Whenever i saw her, she was taller than past.
I envied her height.
I just want to be tall!!

There was nothing exciting in Grandmother's house.
It was a little boring.
So i called my girl friend and friends who i havn't called before.

After that, i went back to my home.

Correction:
    In celebration of my Chuseok, I went to my grandmother's house and get together with my relatives. There was my youger sister. I observed that she was taller than before. Whenever, I saw her I envied her because of her height. I just want to be tall!

    There's nothing exciting in my grandmother's house. It was a little boring. So, I called my girlfriend and friends whom I haven't called before. After that, I went back home.

Explanation:
1. Try to enrich your vocabulary so that, you'll be able to express yourself much easier.
    Example: celebration
                  grandmother
                  observe
2. Try to be careful enxt time on capitalization of the pronoun "I" and on spelling some words such as;
      a. haven't
      b. girlfriend
3. Please don't be confused on how to use "were" and "was." Always remember that we use "was" for singular subject and "were" for plural subject.

Comment:
Hi Dennis!
Thank you very much for coming in our class and sending me your homework. You've done well in your homework. I hope for more improvements from you. See you again on Friday! Keep it up!
-Teacher Joanna