On Chuseok, I planned to go to my grandmother's house. I like to go there because my cousins and my grandmother always make delicious food. Of course, I will wear the traditional Han-bok. I bought it 2 years ago. I think it would not be too small for me! Then, I want to make some food with my mother. I want to help her. However, I guess she would say that it will only bother her. I will play with my cousin. There are two of them and I like to play with my sister cousin. She is very nice to me. I will also remember our ancestors who worked hard for us. I want to go to the grave after it., but it will be too dangerous. So I guess my dad won't let me to.
Anyway I guess it will be a great Chuseok ever!!!!!!!!!I will do a lot of things because now, I am ten years old.

Julie: On Chesoek, I planed to go to My grandmother's house. I like to go there, because there are my cousins and my grandmother who always makes delicious food.
Correct: On Chuseok, I planned to go to my grandmother's house. I like to go there because my cousins and my grandmother always make delicious food.
Explanation: The past tense of words ending with n is added by -ned.

Julie: Of course, I will wear traditional Han-bok. I bought it 2years before. I think it will be not too small for me!
Correct: Of course, I will wear the traditional Han-bok. I bought it 2 years ago. I think it would not be too small for me!
Explanation: The definite article the is used before singular and plural nouns when the noun is specific or particular. Ago is an adverb that means in the past. Again, would is used to talk about a situation that you can imagine happening.

Julie: Then, I want to make food with my mother. I want to help her. However I guess she will say that it will only bother her. Than, I sill play with my cousin. There are two of them and I like to play with my sister cousin.
Correct: Then, I want to make some food with my mother. I want to help her. However, I guess she would say that it will only bother her. I will play with my cousin. There are two of them and I like to play with my sister cousin.
Explanation: Some is used to mean an amount or number of something without saying exactly howm uch or how many.

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