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Harry: i can make cake,cookie,egg fri, salad,kimbap,and other things with out anyone.
Correct: I can make a cake, a cookie, a fried egg, a salad, a kimbap and other  food without help from anyone.
Explanation:The indefinite article "a" refers to a particular or certain one of a class or group thing: a man; a chemical; a house. A sentence must start with a capital letter.



Harry: i can study hard with out any one.
Correct: I can study hard without help from anyone.
Explanation: A sentence must start with a capital letter. "Without" is one word. You don't separate them into two words.


Harry: i can draw trees,house and many things with outanyone.
Correct: I can draw trees, a house and many things without help from anyone.
Explanation: A sentence must start with a capital letter. "Without" is one word. You don't separate them into two words.

Harry:i can read long story in 1hour with out anyone
Correct: I can read a long story in one hour without help from anyone.
Explanation: A sentence must start with a capital letter. Numbers should be spelled out in sentences. "Without" is one word. You don't separate them into two words. Declarative sentences must end with a period.