If I were a translater..

If I were a translater, I would help people who are in trouble because of English. I heard one story.
There was a reporter. He always worked in Korea. Therefore, he didn't learn to speak in English. One day, he had to go to America. He had to speak in English so he couldn't say anything.
Some people who don't learn English might be in trouble when they grow up. And that is why I want to be famous by being a translator. I would also want to be an English teacher. Like I said, some people can't learn because they are poor. So I am going to teach them without payment. Then I will be famous by doing good things. However there are some people who are famous because of money and lies. I will never be someone like that. I would be famous by great and nice things!!!!!!

Julie: He had to speak in English. So he couldn't say an anything.
Correct: He had to speak in English so he couldn't say anything.
Explanation: Be careful when you type words.:)

Julie: Like that some people who didn't learn English might be in trouble when they grow up.
Correct: Some people who don't learn English might be in trouble when they grow up.
Explanation: Use the Present Tense if you talk about facts or things in general.

Julie: If I can be famous again, I would be an English teacher.
Correct: I would also want to be an English teacher.
Explanation: Instead of saying If I can be famous again, use also.

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