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Dennis'homework ( Joanna )

작성자 : ssy***   ·   2014-09-01

1.이정미 is 47 years old. Her height is 164 cm. She likes walking.
She likes listening to ballad. She likes watching comic. She is my motehr

2.전병용 is 56 years old. His height is 172 cm. He likes hypogastric breathing.
He likes listening to teuroteu. He likes watching documentary. He is my father

3.전진규 is 22 years old. His height is 178 cm. He likes weight trainning.
He likes listening to All genres of song. He likes watching comic. He is my younger brother

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DENNIS HOMEWORK:
1.???¤¹? is 47 years old. Her height is 164 cm. She likes walking.
She likes listening to ballad. She likes watching comic. She is my motehr

Correction:
1.???¤¹? is 47 years old. Her height is 164 cm. She likes walking.
She likes listening to ballad. She likes watching comic books. She is my mother.

DENNIS HOMEWORK:
2.??º´¿? is 56 years old. His height is 172 cm. He likes hypogastric breathing. He likes listening to teuroteu. He likes watching documentary. He is my father.

Correction:
2. ??º´¿? is 56 years old. His height is 172 cm. He likes smoking. He likes listening to teuroteu. He likes watching documentary. He is my father

DENNIS HOMEWORK:
3.???ø±? is 22 years old. His height is 178 cm. He likes weight trainning.
He likes listening to All genres of song. He likes watching comic. He is my younger brother.

Correction:
3.???ø±? is 22 years old. His height is 178 cm. He likes weight trainning.
He likes listening to All genres of song. He likes watching comic. He is my younger brother.

 

EXPLANATION:
1. Be careful with your spelling. 
    Example: Motehr - Mother

2. Don't forget to put period in every ending of your sentences.
   

COMMENT:
Hi Dennis!
Thank you for sending me your homework. All of your sentences are almost correct. You just missed out two things. Anyways, thank you for an active participation today in our class. See you again tomorrow and good night!
-Teacher Joanna

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