SAM'S HOMEWORK

i make my on snack.and it is potato chp.i boil and oil,chop,chop!we will do fast.i watched my snack but it is not good.i can cook!!!

CORRECTION:
I make my on snack and it is potato chip. I put oil on the pan. I chopped the potatoes. We need to do it fast. I waited for my snack to be cooked but still it was not good. I can cook!!!

EXPLANATION:

1. Please don't forget to capitalized all of the words that's on the beginning of your sentences.
2. Please be careful on your spellings.
3. Please be consistent on your verb tenses.
4. Please be careful on some of your vocabularies.

COMMENT:

Hi Sam!
Thank you for sending me your homework. Keep it up. I'm looking forward for more homeworks that you will send me next time. Sam just keep on practicing how to cook until you can perfectly cook it. Aja!
-Teacher Joanna