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작성자 : tjg***   ·   2014-08-31

1. I will work part time job.
2. I will ride a bike with my sister at the riverside road.
3. I will go to library to return the borrowed book.
4. I will do assignments for get good grade.
5. I will climb the mountain on holiday with my family.

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Hello Rebeca! ^^ Thank you for submitting your homework today. Kindly take note of the corrections that I made. Thank you! ^^


Rebeca: I will work part time job.
Correct: I will work in my part time job.

I will ride a bike with my sister at the riverside road. -Correct

Rebeca: I will go to library to return the borrowed book.
Correct: I will go to the library to return the book that I borrowed.

Rebeca: I will do assignments for get good grade.
Correct: I will do my assignments to get good grades.

Rebeca: I will climb the mountain on holiday with my family.
Correct: I will climb the mountain on holiday with my family.

 

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