1.

Rachel: Sorry for being late! I forgot to do this on friday night..Sorry DX

Correct: I'm sorry for being late! I forgot to do this on Friday night. I'm sorry!

Explanations: Practice constructing complete sentences. Make sure to include the subject (I) and the verb to-be (am) needed to complete your ideas. Also, capitalize the first letter of the word Friday as it is a proper noun.

2.

Rachel: I have types of friends; best friends, close friends, and friends.

Correct: I have several types of friends: best friends, close friends and friends.

Explanations: Use the word several to talk about different ideas that are usually more than two or three but not many. Also, use a colon (:) instead of a semi-colon (;) to introduce a list of items.

3.

Rachel: Best friends are the ones that I can tell my secrets. They are trustful and they trust me as well. They do accept me as the way I am, but they would also give me good advice if I do something wrong. We would share interests and spend most of free time together.

Correct: Best friends are the ones that I can tell my secrets. They are trustworthy and they trust me, as well. They do, accept me as the way I am, but they would also give me good advice if I do something wrong.

Explanations: Use the word trustworthy to describe a person whom you can rely on as honest or truthful. Also, use a comma to separate a non-essential verb (do) from an essential one (accept).

4.

Rachel: Close friends are the ones that I spend time together in schools.

Correct: Close friends are the ones that I spend time together in school.

Explanation: I suppose that you only attend one school so use the singular form.

5.

Rachel: Friends are the people that I know and are about my age. Classmates, neighbors, students in the same school may be referred to as friends. We know each other but not in depth. We do not make conversations so often. CORRECT!

~Hi, Rachel! Thank you for submitting your homework. I hope you'll apply the corrections next time. Thank you so much. ^^