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Harry:I am pressured of my brother's computer
Correct: I am pressured of my brother's computer.
Explanation: Declarative sentences always end with a period.

Harry: we have to say "Hello"to the parents or older people. because it's tradition.
Correct: We have to greet our parents and older people with respect because it is a tradition.


Explanation: Do your best to choose the right words so that your message will be clearer.

Harry:we need to keep law.
Correct: We need to keep the law.
Explanation: Do your best to choose the right words so that your message will be clearer.

Harry:My brother write about "jews" on the paper
Correct: My brother write about "jews" on the paper.