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작성자 : wwe***   ·   2014-08-28

I always eat foods because of life and use my cell phone for sending messages.
My parents are supportive to me. So, I always help my parents anything.
I always have to thanks for giving anything.
In our country, many parents seem to be supportive to their son or daughter.
I'd like to be supportive when my parents are old. So, I'll need to be responsible.

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Andrew: I always eat foods because of life and use my cell phone for sending messages.
Correct: I always eat food to survive. I also use my cell phone for sending messages.
Explanation: The preposition "to" is used for expressing aim, purpose, or intention.

Andrew: My parents are supportive to me. So, I always help my parents anything.
Correct: My parents are supportive so I always help them.
Explanation:The pronoun "them" is 1.used as the object of a verb or preposition to refer to two or more people or things previously mentioned or easily identified.

Andrew: I always have to thanks for giving anything.
Correct: I always thank them for everything.
Explanation: The pronoun "them" is 1.used as the object of a verb or preposition to refer to two or more people or things previously mentioned or easily identified.

Andrew:In our country, many parents seem to be supportive to their son or daughter
Correct: In our country, many parents are supportive. It's because they love their children.

Andrew: I'd like to be supportive when my parents are old. So, I'll need to be responsible.
Correct: In return, I would like to take care of my parents when they get old. I need to be responsible.

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Hi, Andrew! Thank you for submitting your homework. I could see that you totally love your parents. Just like you, I also want to take care of my parents when they old. Anyway, keep up the good work, Andrew! See you tomorrow.

-Teacher Isabel

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