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작성자 : jsy***   ·   2014-08-28

1.Go to a swimmingclass.
2.Reading books.
3.Study hard.
4.Play with my dog.
5.Enjoy my free time.

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JULIE:
1.Go to a swimmingclass.
2.Reading books.
3.Study hard.
4.Play with my dog.
5.Enjoy my free time.

Corrections:
1. Go to a Swimming class.
2. I like reading books.
3. I study hard.
4.To play with my dog.
5. I enjoy my free time.

Explanations:
1. Be careful with your spellings.
2. Most of your sentences cannot stand alone. A sentence should have a complete thought.
3. A sentence should have a subject and a predicate.

Comment:
Hi Julie!
Thank you for sending your homework and I'm looking forward on seeing you. I'm excited to meet you and teach you. I hope that we could get along together. Let's have fun classes while learning English. Please consider my corrections and see you!
-Teacher Joanna
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