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작성자 : com***   ·   2014-08-27

I think to be a zookiper is hard.
beacuse zookiper are close to many animal.
The zookiper know how to steady the animal

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I think to be a zookeeper is hard.
because zookeeper are close to many animal.
The zookeeper know how to steady the animal

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Hello Nicky! Thank you for sending you homework. :) I am really happy that every time I will give you a homework, you are trying your best to make a good sentence and you do it right away.

*Here are your corrections Nicky. You can also say like this,

I think to be a zookeeper is a hard job

because they are taking good care of different animals

and they should know how to make the animals calm.


~Anyway Nicky, you did great and I am pleased because you always try your best in the class. Just be mindful with your spelling and you can use the dictionary as your guide if you are unsure.  Take care always and teacher is always here for you.


T.Cassie ^_^ 

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