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작성자 : cal*** · 2014-08-27
1. I would like to success diet.
2. I would like to success free talking with foreigner.
3. I would like to be a good leader.
4. I would like to be a good mother and wife.
5. I would like to travel alone.
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Hello Bella! ^^ Thank you for submitting your homework today. Kindly take note of the corrections that I made. Thank you! ^^
Bella: There are my wish lists.
Correct: These are my wish lists.
Explanation: Use the proper determiner.
Bella: I would like to success diet.
Correct: I would like to be successful in having a balanced diet.
Explanation: Be careful on the words that you choose. Choose the more appropriate one.
Bella: I would like to success free talking with foreigner.
Correct: I would like to be successful in talking with a foreigner.
Explanation: Be careful on the words that you choose. Choose the more appropriate one.
3. I would like to be a good leader. -Correct
4. I would like to be a good mother and wife. -Correct
5. I would like to travel alone. -Correct