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작성자 : wwe***   ·   2014-08-27

I call my sister and I say "could you bring my cell phone to me?"
She says " ok, if I bring your cell phone, what's going to do?
hmm, I'll send message my friend and watch a youtube. Any way, do you want to do something? She says " I want to eat spicy noodles, could you cook for me?
I say " Yes, I would gladly cook spicy noodles for you."

Finally, me and my sister eat foods together.

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I call my sister and I say "could you bring my cell phone to me?"
She says " ok, if I bring your cell phone, what's going to do?
hmm, I'll send message my friend and watch a youtube. Any way, do you want to do something? She says " I want to eat spicy noodles, could you cook for me?
I say " Yes, I would gladly cook spicy noodles for you."

Finally, me and my sister eat foods together.
Correct: Anyway, do you want to do something?

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                        CORRECTED COMPOSITION OF ANDREW

I called my sister and I said,  "Could you bring my cell phone to me?"
She said "Okay, what will you do with your cell phone?". I replied,
"Hmm, I'll send a message to my friend and watch shows on  youtube".
Then I asked her, "Anyway, do you want to eat something?". She said "I want to eat spicy noodles, could you cook for me?". I said "Yes, I would gladly cook spicy noodles for you."
Finally, my sister and I ate the spicy nodles together.

                                EXPLANATIONS

*The PAST TENSE indicates that an action is in the past.
*The indefinite article "a" refers to a particular or certain one of a class or group thing: a man; a chemical; a house.
*The preposition "to" is used for expressing motion or direction toward a point, person, place, or thing.
*The preposition "on" is used when referring to the surface of something, days and dates, a device or a machine, part of the body, and state of something.
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