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What friends are for (Teacher Hailey)

작성자 : jin***   ·   2014-08-26

Frends are better than toy because they have similier personality with me and toy dosen't.
Everything they do is playing with me, eat lunch with me so we need to have a simillar personality, but you don't have to have a personality same as your friend.
Friends are for playing, helping, doing team work.
Friends do not have same personality although you can play different game with each friend

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Linda: Frends are better than toy because they have similier personality with me and toy doesn't.

CORRECTION:Friends are better than toy because they have similar personality with me and toy doesn't.

EXPLANATION: Be mindful whenever you are constructing sentences, make sure everything is written correctly specifically when it comes to spelling.

Linda: Everything they do is playing with me, eat lunch with me so we need to have a simillar personality, but you don't have to have a personality same as your friend.

CORRECTION:Everything they do is to play with me, eat lunch with me so we need to have a similar personality, but you don't have to have a personality same as your friend.

EXPLANATION: Be mindful whenever you are constructing sentences, make sure everything is written correctly specifically when it comes to spelling.

Linda:Friends are for playing, helping, doing team work.
Friends do not have same personality although you can play different game with each friend

CORRECTION: Friends are for playing, helping as well as doing team work.
Friends do not have the same personality although you can still play different games with each other.

EXPLANATION:*To make your sentence sensible, you have to be careful the way how you constructed sentences.


Linda, thank you for sending your homework. You did a great job. Keep it up! ^^

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