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homework:About talk fun
작성자 : har*** · 2014-08-26
2.Second,I want to learn with many project about othercountry,and other things
3.third, I want to have more time for customer center.
4.then, I want to iwant to learn grammer with words.
5.finally, I want to talk manything before, class.
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Hello Harry! ^^ Thank you for submitting your homework today. Kindly take note of the corrections that I made. Thank you! ^^
Harry: First, I want to learn about many words .About subjects,jobs,and other things
Correct:First, I want to learn many topics like subjects, jobs and etc.
Explanation: Choose the appropriate word for your sentence. Please remember that /I/ is automatically followed by the word /am/.
Harry: Second,I want to learn with many project about othercountry,and other things
Correct: Secondly, I want to learn the projects in other countries.
Explanation: Choose the appropriate word for your sentence. Please remember that /I/ is automatically followed by the word /am/.
Harry: third, I want to have more time for customer center.
Correct: Third, I want to have more time for customer center.
Explanation: The beginning of the sentence should always start with the capital letter of the word.
Harry: then, I want to iwant to learn grammer with word.
Correct: Then, I want to I want to learn the correct English grammar.
Explanation: The beginning of the sentence should always start with the capital letter of the word. Grammar is not spelled out as grammer.
Harry: finally, I want to talk manything before, class.
Correct: Finally, I want to talk other things before the class.
Explanation: The beginning of the sentence should always start with the capital letter of the word.