Swimming pool is fun!!!

Last summer vacation, our family went to a swimming pool called, " Ocean World". It was a famous and great swimming pool. There were sliding and water bumps which are my favorite. There were pools for children, pools for adults and pools for both. There was also a shelter with a lot of food. That was also my favorite. Me and my cousin went to the water bumps. We bumped each other because of the water. I almost drink the water. I couldn't breath under the water it was little scary. However, I asked my cousin to go there again and she said. " No!! You can't ride that again. Of course I rode it with my mom again!! It was great. I was half tired and half hungry. We ate spicy noodles and I went back to sleep happily.
I want to go there again. I want to tried the water bump again (even though my cousin will hate it!!!).

Julie: I almost drink the water.
Correct: I almost drank the water.
Explanation: The simple past tense of drink is drank.

Hello Julie! Great job! You made just one grammar error. Be careful next time. You should be consistent using the Past Tense when you talk about the past. Thank you for submitting your homework. See you in the class.:)