- 토크펀 로그인
로그인
회원가입 시 다양한 혜택과 서비스를 이용하실 수 있습니다.
학습방
원어민 일대일 맞춤 회화 수업 토크펀! 영어 정복의 꿈을 이루세요!
영작문첨삭
Homework
작성자 : bea*** · 2014-08-21
p 42
Q. What are the things we can do when we are healthy?
A. We can play with my friends and younger brother. Also we can do my homework.
Q. What are the things we can't do when we are sick?
A. We can't make things like a butterfly. Also we can't go outside.
(Double Questions to Teacher Rose)
Q. Teacher Rose, why do you like a candy named 'Skittles'?
A.
Q. Teacher Rose, could you name the people that you respect most? It will be better to tell the ranking of the people.
A.
Thank you~~~Bye~~~
답변
===========CORRECTED SENTENCES===========
A. We can play with
Q. What are the things we can't do when we are sick?
A. We can't make things like a butterfly. Also, we can't go outside.
(Double Questions to Teacher Rose)
Q. Teacher Rose, why do you like
A.
Q. Teacher Rose, could you name the people that you respect most? It will be better to tell the ranking of the people.
A.
Thank you~~~Bye~~~
===========REMINDERS===========
* Since the question is asking with the subject WE, it means that you have to answer it in general not with your own personal answers. You don't have to use the possessive noun MY because you are not talking about your friends and your younger brother. Change the brother to SIBLINGS to connote a sister or a brother at the same time.
* Only use ALSO when you are writing an informal composition. Take note that when you use this, use a COMMA after it.
* You don't have to describe SKITTLES as a name of a candy. It's quite popular so you should just make sure to specify it and make it direct to the point in your sentence.
===========NOTE===========
Hey Tae Yeon! I was surprised you have questions for me too! I'll answer them below for you. Anyway, thank you for this homework! Take note of the few reminders I have for you. See you tomorrow! :) Take care~
Q. Teacher Rose, why do you like 'Skittles'?
A. Skittles is very sweet and chewy. There are different colors and flavors when you open it. It is fun to eat as a snack so it was my favorite when I was a child. My favorite color of Skittle is green which tastes like Lime/Green Apple.
Q. Teacher Rose, could you name the people that you respect most? It will be better to tell the ranking of the people.
A. 1. Parents (Mom and Dad_ - I respect them a lot because they were able to bring me up and support me in my life. They provided my needs and wants. They love me unconditionally. They are also hardworking and patient. I respect them the most.
2. Boss' at work (Filipino & Korean Managers) - They help me grow as a person and learn a lot of things related to teaching. They support me and they work hard to take care of me in the office. They are like my second family.
3. Siblings (Sisters and Brother) - Even if I don't see them that much anymore because we are all busy, they still do not forget to message me. Whenever we meet up, they would always make me feel like I'm their baby. They would buy me food for free and we can talk for hours.
From Teacher Rose 