Hi Jong Hyun! Thank you for submitting your homework. I really appreciate it a lot. Please see me corrections below.

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Jong Hyun:

Hello,my name is Lee jong hyun.
Thanks to,my mother is bear me.
She sometimes angry to me.
But she is always angry not.
She usually look me lovely.
I think all mother love their sons and daughters.
I love mother,too.
Bye
August/Twentith/2014
From Lee jong hyun

Correct:

Hello! My name is Lee Jong Hyun.

I thank my mother because she boar me.

She is sometimes angry at me but not all the time.

She always makes me look lovely.

I think all mothers love their sons and daughters.

I love my mother too.

Bye.

August 20, 2014

From Lee Jong Hyun

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Jong Hyun, please make this in a letter format next time. Thank you for your effort in doing your homework. I will appreciate it a lot if you will submit it on time. Way to go, Jong Hyun! :)