Andrew: When I'm in our home, I drink water.
Correct: When I'm at home, I drink water.
Explanation: It is proper to say "at home" than in our home. It means around or within the area of the house.

Andrew: So, I think the most important drink is water.
Correct: I think the most important drink is water.

Andrew: However I sometimes want to drink else. If I eat bread,
Correct: However, I sometimes want to drink something else.

Andrew:If I eat bread, I want to drink a cup of milk.
Correct: If I eat breads, I want to drink a cup of milk.

Andrew: Because milk and breads match each other.
Correct: Because milk and breads are perfect match.

Andrew: When I'm enjoying to play the video games, I like to drink soda like coke and sprite
Correct: When I play video games, I like to drink soda like coke and sprite.

Andrew: But for my health, I'd like to drink a green tea and a mate tea.
Correct: But for my health, I would prefer to  drink a green tea or a mate tea.
Explanation: The verb "would" is used to express choice or possibility.

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-Teacher Isabel