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Joanna theacher homework. [Andrew]

작성자 : hsp***   ·   2014-08-19


HOMEWORK

★ 1. Cheese, onions, bread, steak, ketchup, lettuce, tomato is composition of
hamberger.

★ 1. Cheess, ham, lettuce, tomato, onions, bread is composition of .

★ 1. Cheese, onions, chicken, bread, ketchup, lettuce, tomato is composition
of chicken hamberger.

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HOMEWORK

Andrew:
' 1. Cheese, onions, bread, steak, ketchup, lettuce, tomato is composition of hamberger.
Correction:
' 1. Cheese, onions, bread, steak, ketchup, lettuce and tomatoe are the composition of hamburger.
Explanation:
' 1. Don't forget to use a conjunction or connectors for you compound subjects.
    2. Don't forget the be-verb of your sentence. It depends on your subject. If the subject is plural the be-verb as well should be plural.
    3. Be careful on your spelling.

Andrew:
' 1. Cheess, ham, lettuce, tomato, onions, bread is composition of
Correction:
' 1. Cheese, ham, lettuce, tomatoe, onions and bread are the composition of a ham sandwich.
Explanation:
    1. Don't forget to use a conjunction or connectors for you compound subjects.
    2. Be careful on your spelling.
    3. Always make a complete sentence.


Andrew:
' 1. Cheese, onions, chicken, bread, ketchup, lettuce, tomato is composition of chicken hamberger.
Correction:
' 1. Cheese, onions, chicken, bread, ketchup, lettuce and tomato are the composition of chicken hamburger.
Explanation:
    
1. Don't forget to use a conjunction or connectors for you compound subjects.
    2. Don't forget the be-verb of your sentence. It depends on your subject. If the subject is plural the be-verb as well should be plural.
    3. Be careful on your spelling.

 


Comment:
Hi Andrew! Thank you very much for doing and sending me your homework. I had fun reading your work and I observed that you really love eating hamburger because you know very well it's composition. But don't eat too much humburger it's not good for your health. Please consider all the corrections I gave you and please avoid them next time. Bye and have a great time out there!
-Teacher Joanna ^-^

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