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작성자 : sue***   ·   2014-08-18

1. chicken - I don't like chicken because not smell good.

2. pizza - Do you have pizza?

3. sandwiches - My family like sandwiches.

4. omelet - I went hotel to eat omelet.

5. peach - I want peach tree.

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                     ===========CORRECTED SENTENCES===========

1. chicken - I don't like chicken because it doesn't smell good.

2. pizza - Do you have pizza?

3. sandwiches - My family likes sandwiches.

4. omelet - I went to a hotel to eat omelet.

5. peach - I want a peach tree.

                               ===========REMINDERS===========

1.
Sue: I don't like chicken because not smell good.
Correct:  I don't like chicken because it doesn't smell good.
Explanation: We use BECAUSE to connect two complete sentences. NOT SMELL GOOD is a fragment. The most basic sentence pattern that we have to take note of is STVDO or (Subject - Transitive Verb - Direct Object). Study on how to arrange your words properly following this format and you will never go wrong.

2.
Sue: My family like sandwiches.
Correct: My family likes sandwiches.
Explanation: FAMILY is a collective noun which is used for groups of people. In American English, collective nouns are almost always treated as singular. Following the Subject-Verb Agreement rule, a singular subject should be followed by a singular verb. The singular form of LIKE is LIKES.

3.
Sue: I went hotel to eat omelet.
Correct:  I went to a hotel to eat omelet.
Explanation: Try to study about Prepositions because even though they might consist of a few letters, they are still important. They act as glue to the words in our sentences and they make the idea clearer. You should know how and when to use the preposition "TO" in our sentences. It is used to indicate the place, person, or thing that someone or something moves toward, or the direction of something.

4.
Sue: I want peach tree.
Correct: I want a peach tree.
Explanation: An indefinite article indicates that its noun is not a particular one identifiable to the listener. Use 'a' with nouns starting with a consonant (letters that are not vowels).

                                ===========NOTE===========

Hi, Sue! Thank you so much for your efforts in submitting this homework! Teacher is really happy that you are always hardworking. I am so happy that you listen well in class and learn a lot of things. Anyway, take note of my reminders and learn from it! They may be hard to understand but you can ask your mom to help you out. These are very useful. See you on Wednesday! Take care always! Bye~

From Teacher Rose

                                                
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