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작성자 : jsy***   ·   2014-08-14

*How to make turkey and ham sandwich*

1.Put lettuce,ham on the slice bread


2.Add tomato and cheese


3.Cover with another slice of bread


4.Cut it in half


5.Serve on a plat and enjoy

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Hello Julie! ^^ Thank you for submitting your homework today. Kindly take note of the corrections that I made. Thank you! ^^


Title: How to make turkey and ham sandwich

Julie: Put lettuce, ham on the slice bread
Correct: Put lettuce, ham on the slice bread.

Julie: Add tomato and cheese
Correct: Add tomato and cheese.

Julie: Cover with another slice of bread
Correct: Cover with another slice of bread.

Julie: Cut it in half
Correct: Cut it in half.


Julie: Serve on a plat and enjoy
Correct: Serve on a plate and enjoy.

General Comment: Always end your declarative/imperative sentences with a period. Thank you! ^^

 

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