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I want to go to England

작성자 : shi***   ·   2014-08-14

I want to go to England
If I can go to anywhere, I would like to visit England. I will take lats of pictures. I am going to England, because, then I can see my old English teacher and learn about England’s history.
First, I am going to take pictures on the London Bridge. Then, I will send them to my friends and talk about them. Then, I will go to see and learn history of England, London.
At last, I will go to my old English teachers house. And have a conversation about improving English skill. And I will see if there is any ghosts in that old house. I have to because it is a Big old house wich seems scary. (Plus, it is dusty!)

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I want to go to England

If I can go somewhere, I would like to visit England. I would take lots of picture. I would go to England because I can see my old English teacher there and learn about England's history.

First, I would take pictures of the London Bridge, then I would send them to my friends and talk about them. I would go to see and learn the history of England, London. At last, I would go to my old English teacher's house and have a conversation about improving my English skill. I would see if there are any ghosts in her old house because it is big and dusty that make it scary.

Julie: If I can go to anywhere, I would like to visit England. I will take lats of pictures. I am going to England, because, then I can see my old English teacher and learn about England's history.
Correct: If I can go somewhere, I would like to visit England. I would take lots of picture. I would go to England because I can see my old English teacher there and learn about England's history.
Explanation: Would is used to say what might happen if something else happens. Hence, the will in your sentences are changed into would.

Julie: First, I am going to take pictures on the London Bridge. Then, I will send them to my friends and talk about them. Then, I will go to see and learn history of England, London.
Correct: First, I would take pictures of the London Bridge, then I would send them to my friends and talk about them. I would go to see and learn the history of England, London.
Explanation: Would is used to say what might happen if something else happens. Hence, the will in your sentences are changed into would. Do not always use and if you can separate the sentences.

Julie: At last, I will go to my old English teachers house. And have a conversation about improving English skill. And I will see if there is any ghosts in that old house. I have to because it is a Big old house wich seems scary. (Plus, it is dusty!)
Correct: At last, I would go to my old English teacher's house and have a conversation about improving my English skill. I would see if there are any ghosts in her old house because it is big and dusty that make it scary.
Explanation: Would is used to say what might happen if something else happens. Hence, the will in your sentences are changed into would. Do not always use and if you can separate the sentences.

NOTE: Hi Julie! Great Job! You learn now the use of would. Practice using it the next time it's applicable. See you in the class!:)

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