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작성자 : moo***   ·   2014-08-13

my mother is a teacher and mother had short hair
my father is a architect and father had short hair

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My mother is a teacher and she has short hair.
My father is a architect and he has short hair.


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1.
Anna: my mother is a teacher and mother had short hair
Correct: My mother is a teacher and she has short hair.
Explanation:
**Begin your sentence with a capital letter and end with a period.
**Avoid repeating same words in a sentence. Instead of using 2 "mother", use the pronoun "she".
**had - past
has - present

2.
Anna: my father is a architect and father had short hair
Correct: My father is a architect and he has short hair.
Explanation:
**Begin your sentence with a capital letter and end with a period.
****Avoid repeating same words in a sentence. Instead of using 2 "father", use the pronoun "he".
**had - past
has - present

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Hello, Anna! Thank you for submitting your homework. Please read the following corrections and explanations carefully. If you have questions and clarifications, you can ask me in our class. Thank you!

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