I thought it was a bad idea that parents pressured their children.

But my thought has changed because of this paragraph.

Tiger Woods is a best athlete who is very talented and strong person.

Also, he is a world's famous golfer.

If parents have an ability to decide for their child's talent, they may be able to advise them.

For instance, Tiger Woods could be a great athlete thanks to his father's pressuring.

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Hi Aloa,

                       I'm glad that you were able to do your homework. It's almost perfect. You just got few mistake. We use has or have with a past participle to describe an action that started in the past and is (or may be) still going on. This construction is called the present-perfect. Just keep on writing English composition to practice your grammar and writing skills.

                     See you in our next class. Enjoy your vacation. :)

T. Lea^*^