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작성자 : jsy***   ·   2014-08-13

I like sandwich.


1.The bread is better more than hambuger.


2.Sandwich is more good for health


3.It's more thin than hamburger


4.It has egg too.

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 Hello Julie! ^^ Thank you for submitting your homework today. Kindly take note of the corrections that I made. Thank you! ^^

I like sandwich.


Julie: The bread is better more than hambuger.
Correct: The sandwich's bread is better than the hambuger's.


Julie: Sandwich is more good for health
Correct: Sandwich is better for our health.

Julie: It's more thin than hamburger.
Correct: It's thinner than a hamburger.

General Comment: Please do study on how you to use articles such as "a, an and the" correctly. Aside from that, review on to use the comparative degree of adjectives. Thank you! ^^

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