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Tom's homework

작성자 : pha***   ·   2014-08-13

I want to make friends that have positive thinking.
I want to make friends that have a lot of humors.
I like the person who has the think about the future

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Hello Tom! ^^ Thank you for submitting your homework today. Kindly take note of the corrections that I made. Thank you! ^^


Tom: I want to make friends that have a lot of humors.
Correct: I want to make friends who have a good sense of humor.

Tom: I like the person who has the think about the future
Correct: I like a futuristic person.


Comment: Work on making your sentences brief and short. You don't need to use a lot of words. Try to organize your thoughts first so that you can avoid using a lot of words in one sentence. Aside from that, always end your declarative sentences with a period. Thank you! ^^

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