Hello Tom! ^^ Thank you for submitting your homework today. Kindly take note of the corrections that I made. Thank you! ^^
Tom: I want to make friends that have a lot of humors.
Correct: I want to make friends who have a good sense of humor.
Tom: I like the person who has the think about the future
Correct: I like a futuristic person.
Comment: Work on making your sentences brief and short. You don't need to use a lot of words. Try to organize your thoughts first so that you can avoid using a lot of words in one sentence. Aside from that, always end your declarative sentences with a period. Thank you! ^^