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my favorite part of body (angel T)

작성자 : jem***   ·   2014-08-11

I like my hands
because
1. I can touch and catch something.
2. I can play instruments with hands.
3. I can feel soft when i touch other's hand.

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Hello Lily! ^^ Thank you for submitting your homework today. Kindly take note of the corrections that I made. Thank you! ^^

I like my hands because I can touch and catch something. - Correct

I can play instruments with hands.
Correct: I can play instruments with my hands.?
? Please use the appropriate pronouns
?
I can feel soft when i touch other's hand.
Correct: I can feel the softness when I touch someone?s hand.
? The word "I" should always be capitalized.

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