Hello Tom! ^^ Thank you for submitting your homework today. Kindly take note of the corrections that I made. Thank you! ^^

Tom:I like to make foreign friends that talk to me with English.
Correct: I like to meet foreign friends that talk to me in English.

Tom: and I like to go to the attractions that have many architecture.
Correct:  I like to go to the places where there are a lot of architecture.