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작성자 : ans***   ·   2014-08-08

I will put it in the little box. And I will dont buy many that. I want to be good.

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I will put it in a little box.
And I will dont not buy many that.
I want to be good safe.

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1.
Alice: I will put it in the little box.
Correct: I will put it in a little box.
Explanation:
*Use the article a/an before a noun to mean an indefinite or general thing or person.
*The word the is known as the definite article and indicates a specific noun.

2.
Alice: And I will dont buy many that
Correct: And I will dont not buy many that.
Explanation:
*And is used to connect word, phrases, or sentences. You should not begin a sentence with and.
*Will and don't can't be together. Just change don't to not.
*That refers to one person, thing, or idea. In the story, there are many pagers, so you can just remove that or say many of those.

3.
Alice: I want to be good.
Correct: I want to be good safe.
Explanation:
*In the story, the businessman had an accident. Instead of good, you can say safe.


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