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About my talents
작성자 : wwe*** · 2014-08-08
First, I have the ability to laugh somebody. So, I'd like to give someone happiness.
Second, I have the ability to cook dilicious food. So, I'll give my lover dilicious food.
Finally, I have the ability to sing a song. So, I'd like to impress everybody.
However, I think I always try to be the practice.
I guess it is important to be the practice.
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Andrew: I have three talents
Correct: No corrections.
Andrew: First, I have the ability to laugh somebody. So, I'd like to give someone happiness.
Correct: First, I have the ability to laugh somebody. So, I always want to give someone happiness.
Andrew: Second, I have the ability to cook dilicious food. So, I'll give my lover dilicious food.
Correct: Second, I have the ability to cook delicious food. So, I always give my lover delicious food.
Explanation: The correct spelling is "delicious". The word "always" indicates your desire to do something all the time.
Andrew: Finally, I have the ability to sing a song. So, I'd like to impress everybody.
Correct: Finally, I have the ability to sing a song. So, I always want to
impress everybody.
Explanation: The word "always" indicates your desire to do something all the time.
Andrew: However, I think I always try to be the practice.
Correct: However, I think I have to practice more.
Andrew: I guess it is important to be the practice.
Correct: I guess it is important to practice a lot.
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Hello, Andrew! Wow! You do have a lot of talents. I agree with you. Practice makes perfect. Continue your desire to make the people around you happy. Great job, Andrew!
-Teacher Isabel