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작성자 : pha***   ·   2014-08-08

Don't smoke anymore. It could feel better now, when you smoke a cigarette.
Howere, It is so harmful to your body.
You would get a cancer. your money will be waste to buy a cigarette.
You must stop smoking. For your whole family

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Hello Tom! ^^ Thank you for submitting your homework today. Kindly take note of the corrections that I made. Thank you! ^^

It could feel better now, when you smoke a cigarette.Howere, It is so harmful to your body.
Correct:  You could feel better when you smoke a cigarette but it is actually harmful to your body. 

your money will be waste to buy a cigarette.
Correct: Your money will be wasted in buying cigarette. 

You must stop smoking. For your whole family
Correct: You must stop smoking for your whole family.


 


 

 

 

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