1. Do you think it is healthy to stay up late at night?

Esther: No.
Correct: No, I don't.

2. Do you wish to change your sleep cycle?

Esther : Yes

Correct: Yes, I do.

Explaination: Giving complete answer to the question would be better, so that the thought of your answer is clear and not vague.

Esther: I am a night owl. l usually start study at night, and l difficulty getting up early in the morning. I feel getting up early in the
 morning. People say it is unhealthy for mo to stay up late at night,
 and l think so, too.

Correct: I am a night owl. I usually study at night and I have difficulty getting up in the morning. I feel sleepy and tired whenever I wake up early in the morning. People say it is unhealthy for me to stay up late at night, and I think so too.

Hello Esther^^ ! I'm glad that you were able to submit your homework earlier than I expected. I hope you'll be able to do it to the next homework that I will be giving you. Let us continue to have fun in our classes and learn more in speaking English. You're doing well in the class and I'm very happy to see you enjoying our lessons. Let's meet again on Monday. Have a happy weekend!

Teacher Lyn~