STREET FOOD
Do you know the most popular snack of the world? It is street food. I want to tell you about those tasty street foods. First, there is a snack that everyone must know. Hotdogs!!! Hotdogs are popularized in America. Many children eat them for snacks after school. We can know that by watching American movies. We use ketchup, mustard, and sugar a lot. So it is not good for health. Next, in korea, there are Dalgonas!! They are invented by a Korean. Dalgonas are like cotton candy. They are made of sugar and baking powder. They are very sweet and they are not healthy. Lastly, there is Duck?boki which is also a Korean street food. It is made of rice cake and a lot of chilies. It is spicy. It is usually sold with Sun?dae, which is a kind of meat.
Julie: Do you know witch snack is the most popular snack of the world?
Correct: Do you know the most popular snack of the world?
Explanation: Which is used to ask or talk about a choice between two or more things. Since you used Do, then stick with it. If you use which, the question is like this, Which snack is the most popular in the world?
Julie: First, there are a snack mast everyone knows. Hotdogs!!! Hotdogs are invented in America. Many children ate them for snacks after school.
Correct: First, there is a snack that everyone must know. Hotdogs!!! Hotdogs are popularized in America. Many children eat them for snacks after school.
Explanation: Be mindful of Subject-verb agreement. If you talk about a single thing, use the singular form of the verb. Instead of using invented, the approriate word is popularized because hotdogs became popular when they were introduced in the United States. The past tense of eat is ate.
Julie: They are invented by Korean.
Correct: They are invented by a Korean.
Explanation: If Dalgonas are invented by only one person, then there should be a. If you mean that Dalgonas are invented in Korea, then the sentence is, They are invented in Korea.
Julie: They are very sweet. And it is also nat healthy food!!!! Last, there is Duck ? boki witch is again a Korean street food.
Correct: They are very sweet and they are not healthy. Lastly, there is Duck?boki which is also a Korean street food.
Explanation: You can combine two sentences if they are related to each other. The word last can be an adjective or a determiner. But based on your sentence, you use it as an adverb, so it should be lastly. Also, be careful of the word spelling. Witch has a different meaning from the word which.
Hello Julie! When you do not know the spelling of a word, use your dictionary or google it. Remember, spelling can change the meaning of a word. Great work, though. Keep it up! See you in class.:)