===NOTES===
Hello Do Yuon! Thank you for submitting your homework about What you want to be in the future. So being a breeder is what you wanted to be. A breeder is the who keeps animals in order to produce young animals.  I do suggest that if your homework is an essay you can share a lot more ideas about it like these sentences:

* I want to be a breeder because I like animals and I want to help animals to produce their young safely.
* I think being a breeder is a fun job because I'm an animal lover.
* Being a breeder in the future makes me feel happy.

These sample sentences can enhance your self-expressions and will also let you to share what's on your mind and how you feel on a certain topic. Just take note of this suggestion and you'll do better next time. I'll see you next week! Thank you! Take Care always! Bye!! :)
~Teacher Carrie