Andrew: When I'm hungry, I usually eat some foods in my home
Correct: When I'm hungry, I usually eat the food we have at home.

Andrew:For example, there are breads on the table. Although taste is bad, I'll eat breads. because I'm hungry. When I'm starving, I'll eat every foods.
Correct: For example, there are breads on the table. Although they taste bad, still, I'll eat them because I'm hungry.

Andrew: I usually eat a rice and various foods like porks, beefs, tunas, kimchis and so on when I'm hungry.
Correct: I also eat rice and various food like pork, beef, tuna, kimchi and so on.
Explanation:You can use the word "also" to avoid redundancy or repitition of words.

Andrew: Therefore I wouldn't like to feel hungry, because I hate hungry feel.
Correct: I actually hate the feeling of being hungry.

Hi, Andrew! Thank you for submitting your homework. Please do take note of the  corrections. Keep up the good work! See you tomorrow, Andrew!

-Teacher Isabel