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작성자 : wwe***   ·   2014-08-06

I want to eat special thing on the weekend.

So, I often cook carbonara for my family and friends.

If I go to pension around the sea, I always eat barbecue on the grill.

And then I drink beers and fruit juice. Actually, I like to eat pork and beef.

But,I try to eat vegetable like onion,carrot,tomato,potato and so on for me.

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Andrew: I want to eat special thing on the weekend
Correct: I want to eat special food on the weekend.
Explanation: We say "food" to be more specific.

Andrew: So, I often cook carbonara for my family and friends.
Correct:  No correction.

Andrew: If I go to pension around the sea, I always eat barbecue on the grill.
Correct: If I am in the pension or resort, I always eat barbecue. Actually, I like to eat pork and beef.

Andrew: And then I drink beers and fruit juice. Actually, I like to eat pork and beef.
Correct: And then I drink beers and fruit juice.
Explanation: You can remove the sentence "Actually, I like to eat pork and beef" to avoid repetition.

Andrew: But,I try to eat vegetable like onion,carrot,tomato,potato and so on for me.
Correct: I also try to eat vegetables like onion, carrot, tomato, potato and so on.

Hi, Andrew! Welcome Back! Thank you for submitting your homework by the way despite the fact that you were partly tired because of your trip. MAmazing job, Andrew!

-Teacher Isabel

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