Hi Young! Thank you for submitting your homework early. I really appreciate it a lot. Please see my corrections below because I will discuss the explanations tomorrow in class.

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1. Paint the town red

Young: Koreans paint the town red is mud festival in summer at west sea   side.

Correct: Koreans paint the town red during the Mud Festival in summer at the west sea side.

2. Throw a party

Young: Next friday, i will throw a big party at the beach.

Correct: Next Friday, I will throw a big party at the beach.  

3. At the top of one's lungs

Young: Basketball players shout before the game, "fighting" at the top of their lungs.

Correct: The basketball players shouted, "Fight!"  at the top of their lungs before the game.

 
4. Be dying to do something

Young: I am dying to go to summer music festival.

Correct: I am dying to go to the Summer Music Festival.

 
5. Before long

Young: I will lose weight before long, because I am working out very hard.

Correct: I will lose weight before long because I am working out very hard.

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I can see your improvements, Young. Good job. Keep it up! :)