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Emma homework

작성자 : emm***   ·   2014-08-01

My dad is doctor.
My mom is teacher.
I like cook because cook made a food.
I like police officer because police officer protect me.

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Emma's Homework: ^_^ VERY GOOD!

My dad is doctor.
My mom is teacher.
I like cook because cook made a food.
I like police officer because police officer protect me.

Correction:

My dad is a doctor.
My mom is a teacher.
I like cooks because they make delicious foods.
I like police officers because they protect me.

Eplanation:

1. Rememeber to use "a" "the" and "an"  in your sentence for detremining the noun or subject.

2. Enrichment of your vocabulary skills would help you to create better sentences.

3. Using pronoun would "they" is much better than using the proper noun again.

Comments:
Hi Emma! ^_^
Very Good! Thank you for sending and doing your homework. You did well in your homework, Keep it up and see you next week. 

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