Hello Lily! ^^ Thank you for submitting your homework today. Kindly take note of the corrections that I made. Thank you! ^^
Lily:My mom is homemaker.
Correct: My mom is a homemaker.
Lily:I think my father will be a businessman.
Correct: I think my father will be a businessman.
Lily:My mom is good at cooking.
Correct: My mom is good in cooking.
Lily:My teacher is funny and kind.
Correct: My teacher is funny and kind.
Lily:I went to dental clinic and a dentist was very kind.
Correct: I went to the dental clinic and the dentist was very kind.
Lily:Police officer arrest the thief.
Correct: The police officer arrested the thief.