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Lisa's daily scedule

작성자 : lis***   ·   2014-07-31

I wake up at 9 o'clock. and I eat breakfast at 10 O'clock.
I do home work at 11 O'clock.
And I eat lunch at 12 O clock.
I learn English at 4 Oclock 7 Oclock

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Lisa:

I wake up at 9 o'clock. and I eat breakfast at 10 O'clock.
I do home work at 11 O'clock.
And I eat lunch at 12 O clock.
I learn English at 4 Oclock 7 Oclock

Correct:

I wake up at 9 o'clock and eat my breakfast at 10.
I do homework at 11 o'clock and eat lunch at 12 noon.
I study English from 4 to 7 o'clock.


Thank you for submitting your homework. Remember, when writing your speech avoid writing same words ( O'clock) again and again too much redundancy is not good when writing a speech.. 

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