Hello Lily! ^^ Thank you for submitting your homework today. I made some corrections on your spelling and subject-verb agreement. Kindly take note of it. Thank you! ^^

Lily: my favorite animal is hamstar.
Correct: my favorite animal is a hamster.

Lily: I like to ride a swing and my favorite food is spagettie and cup nodles.
Correct:I like to ride a swing and my favorite food are spaghetti and cup noodles.

Lily: I don't like shark and crocedile.
Correct: I don't like sharks and crocodiles.