Brian's Homework

Using chopsticks and forks have both advantage and disavandtage.
A good point of using chopsticks is growing my brain
A bad point of using chopsticks is it is very difficult to learn.

An advantage of using a fork is it can lift the food rapidly.
But a disavantage of uisng a fork is it is very dangerous.
Personally i prefer using a chopsticks more than using a fork.

Correction:

Using chopsticks and forks have both advantages and disadvantages. A good point of using chopsticks is you have to use all of your five fingers. It trains your brain. On the other hand, the bad point of using  a chopsticks is it is difficult to learn. An advantage of using the fork is it can lift the food easily. But a disadvantage is it can be dangerous. Personally, I prefer using chopsticks more than using a fork.

Explanations:

"advantage" and "disadvanatage- You need to turn them to there plural forms.

"is growing my brain" - This is not appropriate for the sentence. Maybe, you need to be more careful with the choice of words you'll use to express your answer next time.

"rapidly"- This adjective is not appropriate to use for eating, "easily" could be much better.

"i"- It is supposed to be capitalized.

Thank you Brian for sending and doing your homework. I can see your progress with the composition you sent me. Keep it up and good job! ^_^