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작성자 : fin***   ·   2014-07-30

Im sorry to do late.

Yes man.

Jim carrey has very closed mind.
He feels to tire to all thing.
So we say 'He is 'No man'.
Suddenly one day, A big change comes to him.
He go to a lecture to listen about 'Yes man'
He change to Yes man little and little.
He say 'Yes' to the all things and all things go as well.
He convinces that 'saying yes' is a wonderful thing.
Now he is yes man who has open mind.
but bad things suddenly come to him.
He is frstrated and feels panic.
So hego to a Professor of 'Yes man' lecture.
then, the professor says ' Good thing don't come to only 'yes'
but come ro 'yes mind'

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Im sorry to do late.

Yes man.

Jim Carrey has a very closed mind. He feels to tire to all thing.
So we say 'He is 'No man'.
Suddenly one day, A big change comes to him.
He go to a lecture to listen about 'Yes man'
He changes little by little to a YES MAN
He says 'Yes' to all things and all things go well.
He convinces that 'saying yes' is a wonderful thing.
Now he is yes man who has an open mind.
but bad things suddenly come to him.
He is frustrated and feels panic.
So hego to a Professor of 'Yes man' lecture.
then, the professor says ' Good thing don't come to only 'yes'
but come to 'yes mind'




Gary: Jim carrey has very closed mind.
Correct: Jim Carrey has a very closed mind.
Explanation: Name and Surname should be capitalized always, You have to put the article A here to complete your sentence.



Gary: He change to Yes man little and little.
Correct:  He changes little by little to a YES MAN
Explanation: Study more about subject verb agreement. The verb should always agree to it's subject.



Gary: He say 'Yes' to the all things and all things go as well.
Correct: He says 'Yes' to all things and all things go well.
Explanation: Study more about subject verb agreement. The verb should always agree to it's subject.



Gary: Now he is yes man who has open mind.
Correct: Now he is yes man who has an open mind.
Explanation: You have to put the article AN here to complete your sentence. An is used before words, abbreviations, acronyms, or letters that begin with a vowel sound, regardless of their spelling.



Gary: He is frstrated and feels panic.
Correct: He is frustrated and feels panic.
Explanation: Please be careful of your spelling.

Gary: then, the professor says ' Good thing don't come to only 'yes'
but come ro 'yes mind'
Correct:  then, the professor says ' Good things don't come to only 'yes'
but come to 'yes mind'
Explanation: Please be careful of your spelling. It will make your sentence wrong.




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Hello Gary! ^^



Thank you for doing your homework. Oh! I am looking forward to watch it.
I think this is really a good movie :)



Maybe, it will inspire me a lot.






Thanks for sharing ^^



 



have a good night. Let's see each other again on Frday :)



 




Love,




Taecher Mary <3

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