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So-Ie: France is famouse about Effel tower.
Correct: France is famous because of the Eiffel tower.
Explanation: Be careful in your word spellings and you can also use conjunctions (word connectors) to express reasons or state a fact in your sentencnes.

So-Ie: Seeing Effel tower is one of my buket list.
Correct: Seeing the Eiffel tower is included on my bucket list.

So-Ie: Except these two foods, I want to eat Foie gras, Coq au vin and Ratatouille.
Correct:?Aside from?these two foods, I want to eat Foie gras, Coq au vin and Ratatouille.

Explanation: Using the appropriate words in your sentences is really important so that you can convey your thoughts correctly to what you are saying.

??????????????????????????????????? ===NOTES===
Hello So-Ie! A job well? done on constructing your ideas as you express what is your favorite country! Keep it up! I'm amazed to know that you also dream to go to Paris,France like I do! And yes! Paris, is also called as the City of Love so I think visiting that place is really a great experience. Thank you for submitting your homework and please take note of my corrections. I'll see you on Thursday! Take care :) Bye!
~Teacher Carrie