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homework 7

작성자 : wwe***   ·   2014-07-25

My postive qualities are friendly, fun and talktive.

My negative qualities are impaitent, angry and shy.

I want to have confidence,paitence and diligence.

So, I hope to play instrument in front of crowd.

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Andrew: My postive qualities are friendly, fun and talktive.
Correct: My positive qualities are friendly, fun and talkative.

Andrew: My negative qualities are impaitent, angry and shy
Correct: My negative qualities are impatient, angry and shy.

Andrew: I want to have confidence,paitence and diligence.
Correct: I want to have confidence,patience and diligence.

Andrew:So, I hope to play instrument in front of crowd.
Correct: I hope to play an instrument in front of the crowd.
Explanation: The indefinite article "an' is used before an initial vowel sound. The article "the especially before a noun.

Hello, Andrew! Thank you for submitting your homework. I am certain that through your positive qualities, you will succeed in your daily endeavors or activities. Just stay positive, Andrew! See you later in class.

-Teacher Isabel

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